Sunday, June 17, 2012

Hot Water


It’s been a little over two months since my grandmother’s death; I miss her.  I miss her smile . . . combing and rolling her hair. 

So here’s the memory of her that is stalking my mind today.

I was around twelve years old. One day while my cousin and I were washing the dishes, my cousin complained about the water being too hot.  I’m laughing at the memory as I type, but back to the story. The water was hot, especially from the kitchen drain. So hot, that it took about 10 seconds for the sting of it pouring over your hands to sizzle down.    Anyway, this is how the conversation between my cousin and my grandma went.

Hot Water

EXT.  AUGUSTA GEORGIA- STREET- MORNING

Bright sunny day, several kids cheer as they pass and dribble a basketball.


INT.  GRANDMA’S HOUSE – LIVING ROOM

Southern gospel music plays.

1970’s décor, navy blue carpets, two flower print couches, a furnace heater, antique plates and family photos hang on the wall. Several generations of high school diplomas sit on the mantel.

Water runs hard in the kitchen faucet.

INT. KITCHEN

TWO YOUNG GIRLS stand over a double sink. THE SHORTER GIRL washes the dishes, while THE TALLER GIRL dries them.   AN OLDER WOMAN who appears to be their grandmother cuts potatoes at the kitchen table.

Shorter Girl looks at Taller Girl with a frown on her face

SHORTER GIRL
      This water is too hot. It’s 
          burning my hands. It’s too hot!

TALLER GIRL
               Don’t look at me; tell Grandma . . .

     Shorter Girl walks over the Older Woman.

SHORTER GIRL
         Grandma the water is too hot! 
It hurts my fingers.

GRANDMA
Well, I hope you remember 
      that when a boy asks you to have  
         sex with him. It’s hurts! It hurts, 
just like that hot water.

Taller Girl laughs as Grandma leaves the kitchen and Shorter Girl walks back over to the sink.

SHORTER GIRL
                But I wasn’t even talking about sex.




Life offers the best dialogue!

A bien tôt, 

J.L